6/7/2023 0 Comments Thunderlight by adrienne woods![]() ![]() The events - sometimes I think the author needs to step out of the characters shoes and look at the happenings of this story as a world wide point of view.Elena and Lucian’s relationship wasn’t easy, but it did seem like there wasn’t quite enough substance to it for them to be so entirely in love Each of these decisions/actions was a plot device but could have been better written to make it more believable for me. Not only that, but the characters at times seem like they are just going through the motions that are required to get us from a) to b) in the book. The characters - A lot of the decisions felt forced and slightly out of character coming straight off the first book. ![]() Often this sort of error will completely snap a reader out of their ‘zone’ which is NOT a good thing. their instead of they’re and other typos. Editing – there were a lot of errors in my copy of the book e.g.I have to mention a few of the small things that bugged me the most and brought down my rating. ![]() I have mentioned in a previous review that these books aren't perfect. ![]() I just already know that I'm going to be reading them all. I could only truthfully give this one 3 stars, but I'm late at writing my review and I know I have already rated the next one 4 stars so don't be disheartened! This entire series is well worth the read although I admit I am only on book four out of five. ![]()
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